"The Writing Problems of Visual Thinkers"

by Gerald Grow
School of Journalism, Media & Graphic Arts
Florida A&M University, Tallahassee FL 32307 USA
Available: http://www.longleaf.net/ggrow

Introduction

Some people write badly as a result of applying visual thinking inappropriately to writing. The resulting mismatch between visual thinking and writing produces characteristic, recurring writing problems. Some who write this way are accomplished visual thinkers and successful professionals, others are visually-talented students struggling to survive "the verbal bias of schooling" (Olson, 1977b). If teachers recognize that certain writing problems result from a strength misapplied, they may be able to help train the visual thinkers who will be so important in the technologies of the near future. Note 1.

Some visual thinkers do not have difficulty writing. They are able to shift between the mode of visual thinking and the mode of verbal thinking, or to use both at once. Conversely, some writers have learned to incorporate visual thinking into their writing process, into the images of their prose, or into the illustrations that accompany their articles. Others appear to specialize in visual thinking without carrying out the kind of verbal thinking required for analytical, expository prose; that group is the subject of this paper. Whenever I refer to "visual thinkers," understand that to mean "those visual thinkers who have difficulty writing."

This paper is the result of sustained speculation, based on years of teaching writing, observations of visual thinkers, and a review of the literature; it is grounded in a pilot study of three dozen master's exams written (without editorial assistance) by interior design students and a study of a collection of papers by college undergraduates in architecture. Examples cited in the text come from this study, which I use not as proof, but as illustration of the line of exploratory thought developed here.

I trace the writing problems of visual thinkers to three factors:

  • a lack of words,
  • unfamiliarity with the kind of analysis that leads to the logical sequencing of prose, and
  • difficulty understanding that context must be communicated.


Table 1 summarizes the writing problems this paper explains as the result of misapplying visual thinking to expository prose.

The problem of defining visual thinking. This paper skirts a key difficulty--defining visual thinking--by the pragmatic expedient of looking at the writing of students who are successfully engaged in a course of study that is commonly assumed to require the ability to think visually.

It also skirts the difficulty of testing for visual thinking by accepting the respective teachers' judgment that the students used in this study all displayed the ability to think visually in the manner required in their course of study. It does not discuss the complicating possiblity that visual thinkers who have reached college or graduate school may already have modified their thinking to accommodate the educational environment.

This is not an ideal beginning for a study, as it prevents us from facing some rich complexities inherent in the topic. But it was the way I was able to proceed.

For those familiar with it, this paper presents in some detail an alternative to the widely accepted "orality-to-literacy" explanation of writing problems as presented by Ong, Olson, and their followers. It also supports an alternative to the conclusion of developmental thinkers (Inhelder & Piaget, 1958) that non-verbal modes of thought occur early in life and are naturally superceded by verbal literacy and abstract thinking in the teen years. Note 2.


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