"The Writing Problems of Visual Thinkers"

by Gerald Grow
School of Journalism, Media & Graphic Arts
Florida A&M University, Tallahassee FL 32307 USA
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III. Problems of Context

A good writer establishes the context for what is to follow. There are so many contexts in which to interpret experience that unless the writer directs the reader to a specific context, even the meanings of the most ordinary words become uncertain. "Male" and "female" mean something quite different when referring to electrical plugs than when referring to the mating rituals of whales. (Bransford and Johnson, 1972, is the classic demonstration of interpretation by context.)

But because visual thinkers can always "see" the context they have in mind, they often assume that everyone else can too. For the visual thinker, context comes with the thought-image in the form of its background and surroundings. Context and image appear together as integral elements of a whole thought-just as the foreground of a painting appears with its background as an integral whole.

In a visual thought, a thing does not gain its reality the way words do, by existing in a network of comparisons, contrasts, and shadings of meaning; it simply appears. It is what it is. Visual thinkers too readily assume that everybody knows the context they are referring to.

As a result, visual thinkers can show insufficient regard for setting context, for comparing the present subject to something else that is known, for cueing the reader to activate relevant schemata or contexts for interpretation, or for other common methods of introducing topics.

Phrases, like pictures, appear out of nowhere-full-blown and mysterious. Like children first learning to talk, visual thinkers expect you to know what context is built into their utterance ("Daddy, doggie!") Visual thinkers may suddenly continue, without explanation, a conversation you last had a week ago, as if it was still going on; they may begin writing as if you were privy to their previous thoughts. When visual thinkers have writing problems, they tend to omit words that explain context and instead use terms that suggest sudden, unrelated, dreamlike appearances-terms like "there is," "it is," "one can see," "also," and the like.

Many of the visual thinkers whose writings I examined did not introduce the topics they were writing about. They just started writing out of the blue. Others seemed to recognize the need to write an introduction, to establish a context, but did not seem to know how:

What is a Western point of view towards ethics? How about Eastern views? Are there differences, similarities? A good topic to discuss further is how interrelated the two might be [Notice the verbs: is, are, and be.]


Practice in context-setting, then, should be especially helpful for visual thinkers who want to write better. Such writers might especially benefit from studying how good pieces of writing begin.

Forest and Trees

Visual thinkers seem to have unusual difficulty writing so that readers can see both the forest and the trees--main points and supporting details. Two tendencies pull them in opposite directions.

On the one hand, visual thinkers have a natural love of detail: Looking at a tree, they may be drawn to the patterns of shadows cast by the tiniest hairs on the veins of the leaves. Seeing so much, visual thinkers get lost in aesthetic detail-a tendency I suspect is exaggerated by most artistic training.

On the other hand, visual thinkers think in wholes. They love visual orderliness, balance, and proportion. Indeed, if Silverman (1989) is correct, visual thinkers have a cognitive need to see the big picture. Given their disposition to gestalts, why do visual thinkers have difficulty organizing prose?

"Aesthetic Indiscrimination"

Visual thinkers may have difficulty organizing the details in their writing because they tend toward what I can only think to call "aesthetic indiscrimination." Verbal thinkers constantly analyze, compare, relate, and evaluate. Good writing is fundamentally biased-biased toward a particular point. In writing, the elements of thought are not equal. Most thoughts are subordinate to other thoughts and all are subordinate to a single overriding theme.

Well-organized prose does not suddenly happen at the keyboard; it is the end result of a long process of analytical perception and a commitment to a particular strategy for sequencing the elements of the thought. Good expository prose grows from a subtle analysis which ranks details so they can be ordered in support of a central theme and expressed verbally. To repeat, expository writing is based on a thought process that is, at heart, analytical.

But everything can seem sublimely equal to a visual thinker. Every detail matters, no detail is irrelevant. Visual thinkers tend toward an approach to life that Manfred Clynes called "apreene"-a state of perceptual openness in which they "trust that whatever may come into awareness is worthy to be well received and even treasured" (quoted in Curtiss, 1987, p. 218).

Perhaps this receptive, non-evaluative attitude is a byproduct of the brainwave state required for producing vivid visualizations, so that visual thinkers thus gravitate toward a state of consciousness inimicable to the precise use of words. Techniques for inducing more vivid visualization often emphasize such receptivity (e.g., the deep relaxation used in Autogenic Training). Perhaps this mode of thought is more fundamental and "natural" than analytical thinking; perhaps it evel leads to more humane and holistic creations.

Unfortunately, when visual thinkers have writing problems, this mode of thinking can lead them to become immersed in a flood of ever-changing details of texture, color, and form, or space into a wholeness in which everything is intensely real but "there are no words for it." Then, visual thinkers, inclined to consider each element of perception, thought, or writing equal to all others, tend to produce static, digressive prose that lies passively on the page and offers the reader little direction or help.

Summary

Visual thinkers have difficulty organizing expository prose because their preferred mode of thought is even more fundamentally different from the organization of expository prose than oral thinking is. Prose is organized by story, focus, sequence, drama, and analysis-none of which is native to the country inhabited by a visual thinker. The writing of a visual thinker is like a map of all the possibilities; a verbal thinker writes like a guided tour.
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